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The Personal Statement: The Holy Grail of College Admissions

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Getting into an Ivy League college is tough.

In the admissions ball game, you are only as good as you are on paper. Although you may have spent hours on a particular activity in high school, if you do not capture that in the application in a meaningful manner, then you have done nothing in the admission officer’s eyes. And that means writing stellar application essays.

Of course, getting tip top grades, strong SAT, SAT Subject, and AP test scores, and strong leadership and extracurricular activities help significantly with the process. In this day and age, getting those is almost required and a minimum threshold to get in. Pursue activities that demonstrate your well roundedness and that you’re passionate about – we’ve all heard that over and over again. But you didn’t need me to tell you that, did you?

So why do these amazing, well-qualified people still get rejected every year? Because they didn’t know how to write their personal statement. Let me tell you, getting into an Ivy League college depends on how well you carve together that college application and demonstrate those personal qualities through the personal statement. The personal statement includes the supplemental essays for each university as well as the 650 word main common app essay. Ensuring that those essays form a powerful picture that represents the applicants personal qualities is the holy grail of college admissions.

The personal statement is the one differentiating factor that separates the 1600 SAT, 4.0 GPA student from the one who has a 1580 SAT and 3.9 GPA at the same high school. These stats are no longer “good enough” to differentiate one candidate from another – rather, they are typical scores and grades that the Ivy Leagues expect you to get. Most of the time I can tell right away if a student will get accepted or rejected based on the essays alone.

In fact, I will bet that a student with a lower score, say 1300 SAT and 3.8 GPA with a stellar application and well written personal statement has a better shot than the 1600 SAT student with a poorly written personal statement at getting into the Ivy League. Princeton, my alma mater, states every year that if they could fill their entire class with valedictorians or 1600 SAT score students, they could do so easily.

So how can you get into the Ivy League? Carve together a well thought out college application and personal statement that reflects the qualities that define you.

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